English 110 Portfolio

Final Draft (S)

Shahna Shajnin
Professor Colombo Russell
ENG 110: Freshman Composition
November 20 2025

Cover Letter

For my Synthesis Essay, my intended audience would be the other students in my ENG 101 class as well as those who may want to learn more about linguistic research. In terms of my writing choices, I chose to tailor my language to a professional yet understandable tone. In particular, I avoided complex jargon that would potentially confuse my audience as well as simplified the studies that were cited from some of the research articles I chose. In regards to rhetorical techniques, I mainly focused on the use of logos or an appeal to logic during the creation of my essay. Throughout my essay, I continued to make sensible connections and supported my ideas with credible sources. With the organization of my essay, I attempted to support my thesis that AAVE speakers struggle to maintain their identity and academic performance due to the weight of Standard American English. Initially, I introduced the differences between AAVE and SAE with specific examples. In my opinion, the use of specific statements allowed my readers to visualize the grammatical distinctions, which helps if they are unfamiliar with the grammatical jargon such as “double negatives” or “auxiliary verbs.” Within my essay, I used relevant quotes from real-world studies and accompanied them with rich explanations. I hoped to make my points clearer in this way and depict how the evidence backs up my thesis. At times, I also pointed out underlying implications that some quotes offered, allowing my audience to associate my points with broader ideas. For example, in my third paragraph, I digressed into Ms. Davis’s statements, which revealed that her thoughts related to the concept of an “inferior” race. Making this connection enabled my audience to pinpoint how small actions in the classroom can stigmatize AAVE speakers and leave a lasting negative impact.

During this process, I gained meaningful insight into how Standard American English truly impacts other language learners. At the beginning of this semester, I never would have thought that the grammatical rules that once bound us to clear, precise English can be used to negatively disadvantage speakers of other languages. In my essay, I delved into AAVE speakers specifically, as I have read a few books that incorporated AAVE. I have only been exposed to this new dialect in the past year and I hoped to learn more about AAVE speakers through this essay. However, the more I researched, it was nothing short of disturbing. Multiple papers argued whether AAVE is considered a true “language,” with many considering its lack of adherence to grammar as “an insult” to the English Language. Others tore apart the dialect’s existence, claiming it was nothing more than “how Black people talk.” As I looked into student experiences, a trend was noticeable: AAVE speakers were struggling. Specifically, many AAVE speakers continued to have trouble adapting to the language without sacrificing their home dialect. Along with this, students were faced with external factors such as bias and racism, which affected how AAVE speakers would operate in an educational setting. By discussing the problems AAVE speakers face due to the standards of American English, I hoped to spread more awareness on linguistic discrimination as well as challenge the use of standardized exams to assess a student.

Lastly, the concept that has stuck with me the most is looking for evidence through credible sources. I had difficulty at the start because I was unsure how I wanted to structure my essay. Instead, I decided to take another approach where I located potential sources and decided how each article fits with one another. The process felt like putting together a puzzle, except there were a few missing and alternate pieces. When I began, I decided to compile all the sources through the synthesis worksheet we were provided. From there, I began to skim through each source and identified ideas that would support my thesis. This was time-consuming, as I often lost my place in an article or found new ideas that counteracted previous statements I wanted to express. Despite the struggle, I managed to find a wide-range of articles that supported similar ideas with different evidence. I chose the pieces I felt were the strongest and attempted to piece the puzzle together. As I kept going, the process became easier and I could see how my essay would be structured. Once I got a vague picture of how my essay would be formatted, finding fitting evidence became manageable. When writing this essay, I realized the significance of implementing evidence into a written work because it allows me to build upon my claims effectively. Evidence also has the ability to “show” readers an abstract concept, which is more difficult to do through mere explanation. For instance, I used quotes from both teachers and students to depict the contrast between their thinking when it comes to SAE. If I had only stated what the difference in their ideas may be, my argument would lack its logical quality.

Synthesis Essay

The world is often referred to as a melting pot, with millions of people immigrating to America and integrating themselves into its culture. Along with suitcases and big dreams, people carry their culture, religious beliefs, and their powerful language. Language is the root of connection as it provides a means of communication and holds a piece of one’s origin. Many African Americans speak a dialect of English known as African American Vernacular English (AAVE), which varies from standard English conventions in terms of grammar, vocabulary, and linguistic phonology. Due to its variance from typical grammatical English, educators emphasize the use of standard English in professional settings while keeping the AAVE dialect solely for at-home purposes. This essay will examine how promoting “standard American English (SAE)” within U.S. classrooms, grounded in the ideology of a “correct” dialect, disadvantages AAVE speakers by stripping them of their cultural identity and affecting their academic performance.

As mentioned, AAVE and SAE carry many linguistic differences that characterize the two dialects. In the review article, ““So Much Research, So Little Change”: Teaching Standard English in African American Classrooms,” Rebecca Wheeler, an English professor, delves into the complexities between AAVE and SAE. According to Wheeler, AAVE is “…a variety that has set phonological (system of sounds), morphological (system of structure of words and relationship among words), syntactic (system of sentence structure), semantic (system of meaning) and lexical (structural organization of vocabulary items and other information) patterns…” (Wheeler 3). In a review paper titled “Our Language Belongs in Our Learning: A Culturally Responsive Approach to Improving Literacy in West Philadelphia,” Luke Coleman, a teaching assistant, describes the specific differences that highlight AAVE and SAE’s stark contrast. Notable aspects of the dialect include its use and omission of the auxiliary verb “to be,” which differs from standard English, and its use of double negatives. For instance, in AAVE, the verb “to be” can be removed to indicate the present tense (Coleman 11). In AAVE, the sentence “he is walking to the store,” would be “he walkin’ to the store,” effectively eliminating the verb to be. In addition, when talking about a habitual activity in the present, the verb “to be” is left unconjugated in AAVE (Coleman 11). For example, the sentence “she is usually cooking” will be “she be cookin’” in AAVE. Double negatives are also used in AAVE for emphasis purposes. An example in AAVE is “I don’t hear nothing,” where both “nothing” and “don’t” are negatives. With such grammatical ideas in mind, a clear distinction can be drawn between AAVE and SAE.

Through the United States school systems, educators have enforced conformity to SAE at the cost of students’ AAVE and its cultural significance to them. In his article, “Negotiating African American Language, Identity, and Culture in the Urban Classroom,” Karl Lyn, a doctoral student at the University of Massachusetts, conducts a research study that involves two predominantly Black high schools in South Los Angeles. His study takes statements from both educators and students to convey their beliefs on SAE and their level of comfort within the classroom. Ms. Davis, an eleventh-grade English literature teacher, had stated, “‘I have my students read challenging texts because I don’t want them to just grasp the content, but I want them to adopt the skills and language these writers use to articulate themselves. So I also correct my students when they don’t use standard English and top-tier language’” (Lyn 3). In this statement, Ms. Davis reveals that SAE is considered the normal and “top-tier language,” and therefore, her students must conform to the standards set by the language. She also emphasizes her need to correct them, reflecting that Ms. Davis thinks AAVE is an “irregular” form of language that has no space to be explored within a classroom setting. This mindset glorifies SAE and downplays the importance of the other culturally rich dialect, leaving students feeling out of place. Moreover, Ms. Davis’s beliefs indirectly relate to the racist ideology that Black people’s language and cognition are inferior to those of Whites (Lyn 4). Likewise, in the research paper, “Future Educators’ Perceptions of African American Vernacular English (AAVE),” Tempii Champion, a professor at Long Island University, has shown that “the language that African American children speak in the classroom is devalued in the school setting because of its lack of conformity with the teachers’ language and language expectations” (Champion et al. 3). These findings reveal that bias plays a role in devaluing dialects within the classroom, rather than Black students’ “inability to speak properly.” Furthermore, this detail conveys that a “standard English” classroom has continued to be prioritized, which impacts students of other backgrounds. Thus, maintaining standard English has the potential to disregard African American identities while projecting personal prejudice into the classroom.

Students who typically speak AAVE and are forced to conform to SAE often find themselves uncomfortable and unable to express themselves within the classroom. Within Karl Lyn’s study, student accounts were recorded to compare with an educator’s perspective. James, a student in the class, explains his perspective: “‘I don’t like that I feel like I have to correct myself every time I speak. And we can barely speak without her correcting us…We spend so much time on language, that we barely get to understand the actual book…’” (Lyn 8). Through his statement, James reveals a level of discomfort with the way Ms. Davis’s classroom operates. Specifically, her attitude negatively connotes AAVE and discourages James from expressing his cultural identity. Ms. Davis’s focus on proper SAE within the classroom ultimately causes Black students to conform to the “standard” she enforces, so students like James are forced to speak a certain way to get their ideas across without criticism. As a result, this represses his expression of his typical dialect. Ms. Davis’s approach to education ultimately demotivates students from participating in class, as their cultural values aren’t being respected properly. Additionally, Mathew, another student participant within the study, states, “‘When people talk about the way I speak, or when teachers try to correct me, it’s because they want me to talk and sound white. And I’m not white, so I shouldn’t be penalized for not trying to fit into the way that white people talk’” (Lyn 10). Through Mathew’s perspective, the divide between AAVE and SAE is classified by race, where each race speaks a different dialect of English. Speaking SAE prevents Mathew  from being able to express himself, as he’s forced to conform to how “white people talk.” Mathew rejects the standard norm and decides to continue implementing AAVE, his native dialect, into his speech. Therefore, Mathew attempts to preserve his identity and present to others that language can be implemented in a way to embrace pride in one’s culture. Having a classroom where all dialects are equally respected and improved upon would allow students like Mathew and James to feel comfortable in a learning environment, without feeling the need to “change” themselves. Similarly, in his blog post titled “On Standard English, African American Vernacular English (AAVE), Dialects, and Efficiency,” blog writer Jake Seliger comments on the stigma around certain languages: “The fact is, language changes over time like any other fashion. If you don’t like a particular grammar or a particular fashion that is a matter of taste” (Seliger, para. 5). For Mathew, using SAE is unpleasant as it doesn’t enable him to fully express himself and his identity. AAVE is a language that is more comforting for him, and ultimately, he has a “taste” for it. Relating back to Ms. Davis, her disdain for AAVE can be rephrased merely as a “matter of taste,” where she prefers what she knows and forces conformity of SAE onto her students. 

Along with this, teaching SAE in United States schools negatively affects AAVE speakers by contributing to a decline in academic performance. For example, in the study titled “Phonological awareness skills in young African American English speakers,” Mitri, a PhD psychology student, and Terry, a linguistic PhD researcher, sought to determine the relationship between AAE (African American English) and how well speakers of it can notice patterns within the English language, including letter-word recognition, phonological knowledge, and vocabulary. For the study, 119 African American children in grades ranging from Kindergarten to second grade were involved. Three variables were measured, including spoken dialect use, phonological awareness measures, and vocabulary and reading skills (Mitri and Terry 560). Through the experiment, researchers determined that differences lie within AAVE and SAE speakers, especially when it comes to phonological awareness and reading tasks (Mitri and Terry 562). Specifically, a negative correlation was found between AAVE speakers and these skills, which results from the “mismatch” between SAE and AAVE. For students who typically speak AAVE at home, it becomes difficult to adjust to the strict grammatical and phonological rules that govern SAE, and therefore, students find it difficult to adjust their dialect to conform to the established “standard.” Researchers also noticed that AAVE speakers were inclined to give answers that were dialect-sensitive. These findings suggest that due to the testing structure provided within schools, students have a harder time scoring well in comparison to SAE speakers. Surprisingly, the study determined that most children met the developmental standards for their age group, but dialect differences ultimately affected the performance of AAVE speakers (Mitri and Terry 567). Comparably, Jaylin Nesbitt, a Master’s student in Psychological Sciences, discusses similar findings in her thesis, “Writing while Black: African American Vernacular English (AAVE) and perceived writing performance”. In particular, she emphasizes that most standardized assessments measure the proficiency of SAE speakers (Nesbitt 12), which indirectly penalizes students who speak cultural dialects. Due to this, most standardized testing presses a “construct across diverse groups of people” (Nesbitt 13) by giving SAE speakers an upper hand while posing a disadvantage to others. Such assessments tend to disregard cultural differences and, consequently, cannot be a reasonable measure of intelligence nor serve as an indicator for remedial classes. 

Aside from these constructs, educator bias also plays a role in the declining academic performance of AAVE speakers. Nesbitt continues to describe a study conducted by Johnson and VanBrackle, where written tests incorporating components of AAVE, SAE, and ESL (English as a second language) would be scored. Each of the 9 essays given to graders had the same number of errors and only differed in the language. Nesbitt reveals that written responses utilizing AAVE made it 6.1 times more likely to receive lower scores when compared to passing SAE written responses (Nesbitt 52-53). These studies showcase how educators devalue the use of AAVE, which results in assigning lower scores to written tests using AAVE. When compared to exams with ESL characteristics, AAVE was more predominantly criticized, leading to grades marked as “failing.” In such scenarios, AAVE students are forced to conform to SAE to receive higher grades within a classroom setting. Ultimately, this strips cultural dialects away from students in order to be considered a “high performing student.” For this reason, the academic performance of AAVE speakers begins to depend upon the biases of educators, leading to an ultimate decline. In addition, according to Long Island University professor Champion, educators fail to establish proper expectations for AAVE speakers. He cites one study where it was found that holding high expectations for students causes them to work harder, and consequently, their academic performance improves. Educators’ expectations can manifest within the classroom as calling on students in class and having strict standards on performance (Champion et al. 3). In the case of speakers from different cultural backgrounds, it was found that teachers lack expectations for them within the classroom, preventing crucial teacher-student interactions. These negative attitudes towards AAVE speakers contribute to a decline in academic progress and a lack of motivation to improve, as they are not held to the same standards as their English-speaking peers. This phenomenon, also known as the Pygmalion effect, instills the mindset that only SAE use is rewarded by educators, which disconnects AAVE speakers from their identities by creating an unsupportive learning environment.

Racial biases in education systems have led teachers to neglect AAVE as a dialect, but incorporating AAVE and SAE during learning can uplift students’ cultural identity while meeting academic requirements. In particular, in the research paper, “Language Deficits or Differences: What We Know about African American Vernacular English in the 21st Century,” Harris and Schroeder, professionals within the Psychology department, determined that “culturally sensitive interventions must understand that AAVE use connects…speakers with their communities and cultures” (Harris and Schroeder 196). When removing AAVE from classroom settings, educators are actively severing ties between students and their backgrounds. Such measures stigmatize one’s cultural dialect and instill confusion and fear of self-expression in public settings. In order to remedy SAE proficiency, Harris and Schroeder suggest that teaching SAE as a second language, while continuing to involve AAVE within the learning environment (Harris and Schroeder 196) allows students to continue appreciating their dialect while learning skills associated with SAE. Aside from this, code-switching, the ability to switch language and style of speaking based on the context, encourages students to take on SAE as “another language” while Vernacular English remains as their primary language. Teaching during the “critical period,” where children are more sensitive to their environment, supports linguistic development as they move from one language to another. Specifically, it will guide cognition and speech as they continue to develop, thereby strengthening proficiency in SAE and AAVE.

In essence, SAE has been used to limit AAVE speakers’ capabilities in an academic setting while disposing of their cultural background. In US school systems, teachers expect SAE usage only, which puts down AAVE students and their dialects by preventing them from free expression in the classroom. As a result, students become demotivated from providing their input, conditioned by negative responses to their dialect. Academically, AAVE speakers experience difficulty navigating between AAVE and SAE, leading to decreased scores. Educators also play a role in declining performance, as they treat AAVE students with lower expectations and bias. Having programs available for students to learn SAE and maintain their AAVE in educational settings has the potential to mitigate this disconnect. Educators should also be more culturally perceptive to the variety of dialects within a classroom by remaining respectful while continuing to engage students with SAE.  

Works Cited

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Seliger, Jake. “On Standard English, African American Vernacular English (AAVE), Dialects, and Efficiency.” The Story’s Story, 4 Dec. 2009, jakeseliger.com/2009/12/04/on-standard-english-african-american-vernacular-english-aave-dialects-and-efficiency/. Accessed 15 Nov. 2025.

Wheeler, Rebecca. “‘So Much Research, so Little Change’: Teaching Standard English in African American Classrooms.” Annual Review of Linguistics, vol. 2, no. 1, Jan. 2016, pp. 367–90, https://doi.org/10.1146/annurev-linguistics-011415-040434. Accessed 25 Sept. 2020.